Monday, August 8, 2011

1st Swimming experience.


'This is it'! our 1st experience to swim in our pool.
As I took a big step into the pool, I felt a cold feeling inside me. Everyone started to swam. I did as well, and got use to the warmth.

I loved playing 'Salmon says'. Mr Burton, our lifeguard, whistled every time someone would speak.
IT was an STUPENDOUS experience getting to learn new skills.

Just as I stepped out of the pool, drips of water ran down my body. I grew goose bumps on my arms and legs. I wrapped my towel around me and shivered all the way to the bathroom.



8 comments:

  1. That an a lovely story and i am so lucky you can wrte a good time in your new pool

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  2. where are you stweety and i like your story and i like you writing like a girl and i like your wrting i like your story by joshua in room 4 and i like your story very much i am very happy on you

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  3. i like yuor story love from joshua

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  4. i like your story because i like it love from joshua

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  5. i like your story and your writing was lovely love from joshua

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  6. i like your story and i like your story very much

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  8. tht an lovely story by alecia

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