Wednesday, September 1, 2010

My Old Teddy Bear


My teddy bear is warm and fluffy. It is as brown as dark ice-cream chocolate. It has always been there for me ever since I was 3 years old. It’s nose is as shiny as my gold necklace. My teddy bear is as small as my little sisters treasure box.

I always used to dress her up and take her everywhere.
I snooze up in bed with my teddy bear and cuddle her so tight. We cuddle up together and read a little poem sometimes.

It’s always there for me on scary nights.

Great Dorothy, you have some good vocabulary choices here. I really like the way you have shown how much you really love your teddy bear. Well done.

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